The tremors continued to move over him, and she worried that was doing something wrong.
Really? I actually wrote that? And my first editor missed it?
And I appreciate the proofreader's diplomacy when he/she asks? "Is the word she missing here?" lol!
And other instances that he thought it better not to mention those just yet.
WTH? Why is "those" even in this sentence?
And how about...
The printer kicked on, and in a few seconds Quinn was handing the one of the pictures to Hawk.
And the proofreader..."Is there an extra word here?" lmao! Yes, there there is.
Lordy, lordy. I'm learning a lot...mostly that I frequently write with all the skills of a first grader. And hell...I refuse to go back and proofread this blog entry. I'm just a putz like that!!! (Did I use that right? lol!)