Sunday, June 19, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday



This is my first entry into the Six Sentence Sunday blog fun. It is an excerpt from my soon to be released novel Burn: All-American Vampires. The hero, Ty Buchanan, finds himself in a pretty tough predicament.


His thoughts were a jumbled mess of rage and vulnerability and hunger. The only thing that kept him from screaming madness was the body of the woman he held tight against him. He couldn't remember her name or why he was hurt so badly. He just knew that she was the only thing keeping him sane. He buried his hands in her hair and rode the tide of relief and agonizing desire that swept over him. He couldn't think past the moment and the warm blood flooding his mouth. 

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BURN: ALL AMERICAN VAMPIRES 1
RELEASE DATE JULY 7, 2011
SIREN PUBLISHING





39 comments:

  1. Great description with the "...blood flooding his mouth."

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  2. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday!

    You show his vulnerability really well.

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  3. Welcome to SSS! I was an SSS virgin, too, until today.

    Loved your excerpt and you definitely met my ZING factor (when he buried his hands in her hair). lol. I love a vulnerable, wounded hero. Well done and looking forward to more!

    Oh, and your blog page is well done, too!

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  4. I love the intensity you convey here. Very attention grabbing.

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  5. Tasty! (And powerful.) Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. Great fist entry. Hope you'll stick around. Best of luck with the release!

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  6. Great title and intriguing six - welcome to a wonderful group

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  7. Great six, Bree!!! Very intense scene. Can't wait for more! Welcome to SSS ^__^

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  8. Wow, love this interior monologue. You show his confusion and desperation very well. Looking forward to reading more!

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  9. Gee, is it her blood, his, or someone else's? Quite a predicament.

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  10. Ooh! I like vampire stories. And your cover is hot!

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  11. OMG, I need a cold shower! That was a hot six!!!

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  12. Love dark and violent vampire stories. Very hot.

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  13. Wow, more please - interesting six!

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  14. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday.
    Steamy six.

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  15. Love a hot vampire. Great six!

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  16. You conveyed his sense of being adrift in sensation very well. Nicely done.

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  17. I'm a fan of the fang - where can I buy it??

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  18. Love, love, LOVE it! Great six, right up my street!

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  19. Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday! Nice, sexy six!

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  20. Ooo! Delicious! Very hot and intense! :)

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  21. An amazing tease and hot picture. Fantastic six.

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  22. Seems like a very intense scene. Gotta love a good vampire story! ;)

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  23. Awesome, very intense! Congrats on your upcoming release.

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  24. I wonder why he's in such pain. It makes me feel for him.

    Great job on getting published.

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  25. Very sensual and intense. I'll be watching for the book's release.
    PS: Thanks for commenting on my blog.

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  26. Thanks so much for the super welcome to SSS. I've had a great time and read some really super excerpts. Look forward to more.

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  27. Welcome to SSS! This was an intense Six! Such Desperation!

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  28. Poor guy. Hope she can heal him.

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  29. Wow! Intense. Is there any other way with a vampire? :)

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  30. Welcome to six sunday! WOOT Love your blog..purples my fav color :)

    And talk about making a WOW entrance...loved this six! Hope you'll be joining Six Sunday on a regular basis.

    Oh, and love the cover!

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  31. I'm a relative newbie to SSS as well :) Very powerful 6!

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  32. A frenzied and fabulous six sentences!

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