Sunday, July 10, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday



Here's another six from my novel Burn, All-American Vampires 1, which is on sale now at Siren.
 



He kissed her, a long, wet tasting. He loved kissing her, loved the little mewling sighs she made as their tongues slid against one another in hot demand. He felt her legs lift to tighten around his hips, locking around his back to urge him even deeper. He broke the kiss and rested his forehead against hers, just absorbing the feel of her body’s tight clasp. “Son of a bitch, baby, you feel so good."


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54 comments:

  1. Reads very realistic. Vamps know how to have fun.

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  2. Very nice and kinda endearing six :-)

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  3. Hot damn, that was intense! Steamy six!

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  4. *fanning self* That was hot! Very nice six :)

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  5. Hot scene!! Amazing six! thanks for sharing!

    xx
    A.

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  6. Arhh Bree, 'mewling sighs', what a fantastic combination of words. You rocked my world lovely lady, I had to go and make a coffee to calm down and keep reading. Thank you!

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  7. Totally hot six--and pic! Loved it.

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  8. That is hot, hot, hot!!!Yikes, I have to read this book. Thanks for pointing me in your direction. :)

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  9. Endearing, and steamy sexy hot. Burn, baby, burn...

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  10. It was hot - but it was also sweet the way he rested his head on hers. Nice six.

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  11. Really well done, hot and sweet. Does she say, "I know I do, but how about you?" ;)

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  12. Nice. So sweet and hot at the same time. The little details really make this -- her 'mewling' and how he rests his forehead against hers. Lovely.

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  13. Where IS my cold shower when I need it! Awesome six!

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  14. So very hot and sensual! Great six!

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  15. Muy caliente! Very sexy! Nice Work.

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  16. Sexy Six!I love how he rested his forehead against hers :) Sweet.

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  17. Very, very sexy- but the emotional connection is there as well. Excellent snippet.

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  18. He's really into her. Love that. Great six. Very hot.

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  19. The "son of a bitch" is a perfect, er...climax to your 6. Somehow you made it come out sounding like the sweetest term of endearment.

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  20. darn hot sexy six for sure! I spotted this on book on the Siren website the other day and loved the cover...now I definitely know I want to read it -- have you got a page on goodreads so i can add it to my to-read list? I tried looking for it but nothing came up.

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  21. Holy hot six, Bree! Definitely on my tbr pile. :)

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  22. Sensually steamy, and vamps to boot! I don't go out of my way to read erotica (though I do write reviews for Naughty Nights Press), but this would be one I would go out of my way for!!!

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  23. Sizzling! Love that he pauses to tell her how good it is.

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  24. I think that scene melted my computer!

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  25. I just have one thing to say. Hot. Let me say it again. Hot! Hot! HOT!

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  26. Steamy six. Well done.

    Best,
    Gin Price

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  27. A lot of nice steam in this six.

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  28. Thanks everyone for stopping by to read.

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  29. This is so hot I have to crank up the fan!

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  30. Hotness. Great job.

    Best,
    Allure Van Sanz

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  31. "Mewling sighs"--great detail! Love it!

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  32. Hi,

    Nice touch of pause mid-flight! Takes a man of substance and will power to battle womans' allure and his imminent downfall. :o

    best
    F

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  33. Great body language and heat--sizzling six!

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