Sunday, August 28, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday


 This week's excerpt is from my short story Mating Run.


“Ladies and gentlemen, those of you who plan on participating in the mating run should begin assembling in the designated area at this time.”
Caleb spoke up quickly, “Maggie,  I’ll take you home since you're not going to run.”
“Oh, I absolutely plan to run tonight.” She sent him an evil little smile and turned to head outside with several other wolves.
Spooner cast him a triumphant grin before he took off after Maggie. 
Caleb wanted to howl.


 

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39 comments:

  1. Her cheekiness and his frustration work so well together. Fantastic six! Thank you.

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  2. She's got his tongue hanging out. Hope he doesn't trip over it when he takes off running too. :)

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  3. She's bold and spirited. Great six!

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  4. What a tease! I hope Caleb can run fast.

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  5. Me thinks someone is a little possessive!

    xx
    A

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  6. Ha. I can see the expression on his face.

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  7. Oooh, what a sassy little thing she is! Caleb is in for some fun. ~wink~

    Sassy Six, Bree!

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  8. Let him howl at the moon-alone. Dynamite six!

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  9. ohh poor baby was his feelings hurt??

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  10. Hah! Better get your running shoes on, Caleb.

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  11. Muahahaha! She sure stuck a spoke in his wheel! LOL

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  12. I see a dog-fight on the horizon. Great 6

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  13. LOL! Who's going to catch up with her?

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  14. Heehee! Someone's got a devilish streak in her! ;)

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  15. Jealousy is a great plot device. And she does it so well! Kudos. I love your writing, Bree!

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  16. Nothing like a spirited chase! Wish I could join in.

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  17. Awesome. That will teach him! I hope she runs her heart out!

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  18. Such a cool concept! Love her spirit. Yowl!

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  19. Sensual and playful, thank you for sharing!

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  20. Oh, I love the idea of a mating run. And she's got great spunk. Those boys are gonna have to run hard to catch her, me thinks.

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  21. Looks like he's got some competition. I say, it's good for him. :)

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  22. Can't wait to see who she lets catch her! Caleb's had better have on his jet powered sneakers! LOL Excellent six.

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  23. Hah! I like a spunky wolf. Great six, Bree!

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  24. This a fantastic snippet - so hot and full of promise! Makes me want to read it bad...

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  25. I don't exactly know what the mating run is, but it sounds exciting!

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  26. Uh oh sounds like he's got a choice to make--chase or let her go.

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  27. She's feisty, I like her. Awesome six!

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  28. Cool concept -- mating run. Sounds like fun!

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  29. Poor Caleb. Guess he's gonna have to run too, huh? :)

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  30. Seems this run is going to be intense in more ways than one :)

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