Sunday, September 25, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This week's excerpt is from my current WIP Thirst: All-American Vampires, 2.

“Claire, this is probably not a good idea.” He said the words even as he pulled her closer, his hand tunneling under her shirt to spread with eager possession against her skin. He felt the quiver of her stomach muscles. She leaned back and rested her head against his chest, and he bent to nuzzle against the tender spot where neck met shoulder.
“No,” she whispered her agreement before she turned around to face him, “probably not.” She lifted her face, offering her lips to  him.



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26 comments:

  1. Jessica E. SubjectSeptember 25, 2011 at 4:48 AM

    Not a good idea, but I think they'll go for it anyway. Great six! :)

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  2. UnknownSeptember 25, 2011 at 8:08 AM

    ...but I hope they'll do it anyway. :)

    And what a beautiful picture you included!

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  3. Lisa FoxSeptember 25, 2011 at 8:39 AM

    The worst ideas are sometimes the very best ones...

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  4. Marie DeesSeptember 25, 2011 at 8:59 AM

    Oh, hot six! Yum.

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  5. Cara BristolSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    Ah, what the hell. Let's go for it! Nicely done.

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  6. Sandra SookooSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:17 AM

    Maybe...do it anyway! Fantastic 6!

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  7. UnknownSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:35 AM

    The best ideas are often the worst ones, that I agree with :)

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  8. sueSeptember 25, 2011 at 10:59 AM

    and the point? :D

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  9. Zee MonodeeSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:31 AM

    The lips say something but the body tells a different story - great job illustrating that! :)

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  10. JoAnne KenrickSeptember 25, 2011 at 11:35 AM

    gosh, such a tender loving scene...I almost felt like a voyeur!! Awesome :)

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  11. Cate MastersSeptember 25, 2011 at 12:30 PM

    As long as they both agree! :) Love it.

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  12. Anne HollySeptember 25, 2011 at 1:06 PM

    I love nuzzling. :)

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  13. Brien MichaelsSeptember 25, 2011 at 1:08 PM

    I'm not usually into vampires, but I can definitely see myself reading the rest of this. Great six!

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  14. Gem SivadSeptember 25, 2011 at 1:32 PM

    Those six are just perfect! Out of the ball park and touchdown too! Awesome.

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  15. Paula MartinSeptember 25, 2011 at 2:16 PM

    not a good idea - but who cares? Great six!

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  16. Taryn KincaidSeptember 25, 2011 at 2:53 PM

    Sexy!

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  17. AlixSeptember 25, 2011 at 3:14 PM

    I love your contract between words and intentions..exceptionally written concept to get across and you managed it perfectly. Well done.

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  18. KaceyHammellSeptember 25, 2011 at 4:14 PM

    oh ya, can't help but surrender to him. Sexy, loved it.

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  19. Sherry GloagSeptember 25, 2011 at 4:52 PM

    sometimes its better not to think

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  20. Sandra Renee PessoSeptember 25, 2011 at 7:32 PM

    Oh, I love the sexual tension here! Sensational, sexy six. Nice job!

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  21. UnknownSeptember 25, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    The dialogue is such a nice contrast to what's actually going on.

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  22. AnonymousSeptember 25, 2011 at 9:48 PM

    Well, it feels like a good idea to me.

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  23. Lucy FelthouseSeptember 26, 2011 at 7:00 AM

    Ooh, sexy! Really well done :)

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  24. J.A. BeardSeptember 26, 2011 at 6:45 PM

    Haha. Who cares if it's a good idea? :)

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  25. UnknownSeptember 27, 2011 at 1:55 AM

    Sometimes the "best ideas" are over rated! LOL. Great sexualy tension in this Six!

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  26. 1000th.monkeySeptember 27, 2011 at 12:27 PM

    Very nicely written ;) You can really feel the chemistry between them

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