Sunday, September 25, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This week's excerpt is from my current WIP Thirst: All-American Vampires, 2.

“Claire, this is probably not a good idea.” He said the words even as he pulled her closer, his hand tunneling under her shirt to spread with eager possession against her skin. He felt the quiver of her stomach muscles. She leaned back and rested her head against his chest, and he bent to nuzzle against the tender spot where neck met shoulder.
“No,” she whispered her agreement before she turned around to face him, “probably not.” She lifted her face, offering her lips to  him.



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26 comments:

  1. Not a good idea, but I think they'll go for it anyway. Great six! :)

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  2. ...but I hope they'll do it anyway. :)

    And what a beautiful picture you included!

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  3. The worst ideas are sometimes the very best ones...

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  4. Ah, what the hell. Let's go for it! Nicely done.

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  5. The best ideas are often the worst ones, that I agree with :)

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  6. The lips say something but the body tells a different story - great job illustrating that! :)

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  7. gosh, such a tender loving scene...I almost felt like a voyeur!! Awesome :)

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  8. As long as they both agree! :) Love it.

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  9. I'm not usually into vampires, but I can definitely see myself reading the rest of this. Great six!

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  10. Those six are just perfect! Out of the ball park and touchdown too! Awesome.

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  11. not a good idea - but who cares? Great six!

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  12. I love your contract between words and intentions..exceptionally written concept to get across and you managed it perfectly. Well done.

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  13. oh ya, can't help but surrender to him. Sexy, loved it.

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  14. Oh, I love the sexual tension here! Sensational, sexy six. Nice job!

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  15. The dialogue is such a nice contrast to what's actually going on.

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  16. Well, it feels like a good idea to me.

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  17. Haha. Who cares if it's a good idea? :)

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  18. Sometimes the "best ideas" are over rated! LOL. Great sexualy tension in this Six!

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  19. Very nicely written ;) You can really feel the chemistry between them

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